the thrill of the chase enjoy it every day in five seven five
posted by Jim Tantillo at 5/17/2006 11:04:00 AM
jim,this poem and "storm warning" are both excellent. maybe youshould start sending these outbeyond your blog, if you haven'talready. these deeserve to bepublished. good stuff man!
ELKWE ARE SOsmallraccoon the blind hound sees itwith his noseopening day my first shot brings downan aspen branchlevon machenry
Levon, thanks as always for reading and your support. Someday maybe I'll get up the ambition to submit one of them somewhere. who knows.by the way, I love this one:opening daymy first shot brings downan aspen branchWe're gonna have to make that one a featured guest haiku I think....
jim,thanks. an honor. like hunting,i guess i hit the mark every now and then.levon
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jim,
this poem and "storm warning"
are both excellent. maybe you
should start sending these out
beyond your blog, if you haven't
already. these deeserve to be
published. good stuff man!
ELK
WE ARE SO
small
raccoon
the blind hound sees it
with his nose
opening day
my first shot brings down
an aspen branch
levon machenry
Levon, thanks as always for reading and your support. Someday maybe I'll get up the ambition to submit one of them somewhere. who knows.
by the way, I love this one:
opening day
my first shot brings down
an aspen branch
We're gonna have to make that one a featured guest haiku I think....
jim,
thanks. an honor. like hunting,
i guess i hit the mark every now and then.
levon
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