autumn bird hunt
behind the tree
an elk peers
behind the tree
an elk peers
posted by Jim Tantillo at 7/16/2006 11:13:00 PM
Sunday, July 16, 2006
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1 Comments:
This is excellent. What about leaving out "at me", since that is implied?
So it could read as
autumn bird hunt
behind the tree
an elk peers
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