north woods tavern
above the bar -
all those antlers!
above the bar -
all those antlers!
posted by Jim Tantillo at 9/24/2006 08:01:00 PM
Sunday, September 24, 2006
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3 Comments:
This is good. What about switching lines one and two?
north woods tavern
above the bar --
all those antlers!
:)
agreed! thanks.
jt
jt,
left a message one poem down from
the issa haiku. don't know if
you look over old posts so thought
i'd let you know about it here.
levon
autumn sleet
something silver thrashes
in the eagle's beak
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