Saturday, November 10, 2007

November night -
the steam rising
from a dead deer


inspired by Extra Special Bitter

2 Comments:

Blogger extraspecialbitter said...

Jim - I appreciate the attribution. Even though the first two lines are the same, mine is more of a suburban scene, whereas yours is decidedly set in the woods; therefore you have two completely distinct haiku.

Saturday, November 10, 2007 11:33:00 PM  
Blogger Jim Tantillo said...

thanks Paul, much appreciated. your haiku is terrific.

Monday, November 12, 2007 10:43:00 AM  

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